短文改错试题范文
短文改错试题范文第1篇
镇人民政府：
对你镇的数次请示，经研究作答复如下：
其一，原则同意批准你镇建立联合贸易公司，负责本镇的内、外贸易工作。你镇应尽快使联合贸易公司开始营业。
其二，你镇提出试行“关于违反计划生育规定的处罚办法”最好不执行，因为这个办法违反上级有关文件精神。
其三，对你镇提出要建一俱乐部活跃居民文化生活一事，予以批准，但规模要适当控制，量力而行。 其四，同意你镇组团参加在上海举办的服装节和在服装节上进行引资促销活动。 市人民政府 2001年月日 【要点】
一是违反一文一批的原则。市政府在积存了某乡四件请示之后，才合在一起给了这样一个批复，这样做有多种弊端：(1)延误时间，耽误下级工作;(2)多种事项集于一篇公文之中，内容杂乱;(3)一份公文涉及多方面工作，给下级落实带来困难。因为这些工作在下级机关是由不同单位和不同负责人分管的，由哪个负责人承担批复的落实工作，不好确定。正确的做法是，下级报来一份请示，就及时回复一份批复。对方的四份请求，应有四份相应的批复。
二是标题不合要求。本批复的标题只有文种品称，没有发文机关和主要内容，不够认真严肃，也影响工作效率。
三是用语含糊不清，观点不明确。如“原则同意”、“最好不执行”、“违反上级有关文件精神”，都没有明确指出自己的观点，使下级无法执行。 四是时间要用汉字，不能用阿拉伯数字。
二、公文改错题(找出下列公文中的错误并说明理由，本题10分。) 关于申请拨给灾区贷款专项指标的报告 省行：
月日，地区遭受了一场历史上罕见的洪水袭击，江两岸乡、村同时发生洪水，灾情严重。经初步不完全统计，农田受灾总面积达38000多亩，各种农作物损失达100多万元，农民个人损失也很大。灾后，我们立即深入灾区了解灾情，并发动干部群众积极开展生产自救。同时，为帮助受灾农民及时恢复生产，我们采取了下列措施：
一、对恢复生产所需的资金，以自筹为主。确有困难的，先从现有农贷指标中贷款支持。
二、对受灾严重的困难户，优先适当贷款，先帮助他们解决生活问题。到月日止，此项贷款已达万元。
由于这次灾情过于严重，集体和个人的损失都很大，短期内恢复生产有一定的困难，仅靠正常农贷指标难以解决问题。为此，请省行下达专项救灾贷款指标万元，以便支持灾区迅速恢复生产。 以上报告当否，请批示。 银行市支行 一九九八年月日 【要点】
一、文种选择有误
从标题看，这篇公文是向省行提出灾区贷款专项指标的申请，目的是获得省行的批准。从正文的主体部分看，两条措施确属报告性质，但随后出现的专项贷款请求，就不是报告应有的内容了。从结语看，“以上报告妥否，请批示”，有着很强的期复性。因此，综合起来看，这篇公文应改为《关于拨给灾区贷款专项指标的请示》。
二、内容含糊
这是由于原文混淆了报告和请示的界限而造成的。写请示，只需写明请示缘由、请示事项，最后提出请示要求即可，与此无关的内容不应写入。而原文提出的两条措施：“对恢复生产所需的资金，以自筹为主”、“对受灾严重的困难户，优先适当贷款”，既不是请示缘由，也不是请示事项，不应该写入文中。
三、语言不准确
文中有多处语言不确切。如“江两岸乡、村同时发生洪水”，江两岸所有村庄都遭受洪灾似不可能，“同时发生”更不可能。“灾情较重”跟后面“这次灾情过于严重”的说法相龃龉;“据初步不完全统计”，“初步”和“不完全”语意重复。
三、公文改错题(找出下列公文中的错误并说明理由，本题10分。) 各省、自治区、直辖市人民政府：
今年初，枝江县董镇信用社职工同志为保卫国家财产，面对英勇歹徒，顽强搏斗，最后擒获歹徒。为此决定：授予同志先进工作者称号。
国务院希望各条战线的群众、工人、农民、知识分子认真贯彻十三届四中、5中、6中全会精神，胸怀全局，艰苦奋斗，努力工作，为社会主义现代化建设做出更大贡献。 中共中央、国务院90年4月24日 要点：
1.标题结构不完整，应改为“中共中央、国务院关于授予同志先进工作者称号的决定”。 2.“今年初”这一时间概念表达不当，应改为“1990年初”。 3.枝江县前应冠以省名。 4.“英勇歹徒”的表达有误。
5.“群众、工人、”等搭配不当。 6.数字表达不一致，不应用阿拉伯数字。 7.作者排列有误，应分两行排列。 8.日期书写有误，应用汉字。
四、公文改错题(找出下列公文中的错误并说明理由，本题10分。)
市工业局文件 字(2002)号
签发人：张平
市工业局关于印发“关于节减行政经费的几项规定”的通知
我局同意市财政局“关于节减行政经费的几项规定”中提出的意见，认为切实可行，请结合本单位的情况参照执行。
附：市财政局文件 2002.10.16
主题词：印发、规定、通知
抄送：市人民政府、市财政局 要点：
(1)发文字号不规范，应为〔2002〕23号;
(2)下行文不应标注签发人，应取消，发文字号居中排列;
(3)标题不规范，应将“印发”改为“转发”，引号应改为书名号《》; (4)缺主送机关，应写明收文单位名称;
(5)转发同级机关公文，不应用批示语气，如“我局同意”、“所提意见切实可行”等; (6)《规定》属规范性公文，应认真执行而不应写“参照”执行; (7)附件说明不规范，应具体写明附件的标题;
(8)成文日期不规范，应用汉字写全年月日，即二〇〇二年十月十六日;应加盖印章;
(9)主题词不规范，应表明公文的主题项：行政经费;主题词之间空一个汉字位置，不用标点符号; (10)转发公文不应再向其他机关抄送，应取消抄送机关。
五、指出下列公文的错误，并修改公文，然后根据修改后的公文写一份回复性公文。
公 函
北师大外语学院，
首先，我们以山西管理职业学院的名义，向贵院致以亲切的问候。我们以崇敬和迫切的心情，冒昧的请求贵院帮助解决我院当前面临的一个难题。
事情是这样的：最近，我们经与某某学院磋商，决定派三位老师到该院进修学习，只因该院正处在基建建设时期，基建工程尚未完毕，以致本院职工的住房和学生的宿舍拥挤不堪。我院几位进修教师的住宿问题，虽几经协商，仍得不到解决。然而信息时代，知识更新，培养人才，时不我待，我院几位老师出省进修学习机会实属难得，时间紧迫，任务繁重，要使他们有效地学习，则住宿问题是必须解决的。
为此，我们在进退维谷的情况下，情急生智，深晓贵校府高庭阔，物实人齐，且具有助人为乐，救人之危的美德。于是，我们抱着一线希望，与贵院商洽，能否为我院教师进修学习提供方便，并同时解决其住宿问题，如贵院对于住宿一事能够解决，我们将不胜感激!
以上区区小事，不值得惊搅贵院，实为无奈，望谅解。并希望尽快得到贵院的答复。 此致
敬礼!
山西管理职业学院(公章)
二〇〇七年十一月
错误之处：
①、标题不规范，应写规范标题。 ②、主送机关位置不规范。
③、结语不规范，不能用书信的结语作函的结语，应写“请函告为盼”等。 ④、成文时间书写不完整。
⑤、此函的缘由和事项叙述啰嗦。
⑥、文种语言有献媚之嫌，又有不敬之词。 ⑦、语言不规范，不简洁。
历年公考公文改错真题
公文改错题(指出下列公文的8处错误) 关于办理商标注册附送证件问题的批复
《关于办理商标注册附送证件问题的请示》收悉，国务院大致同意关于办理商标变更、转让或者续展注册时不再附送原商标注册证的意见，但考虑到这一问题涉及《商标法实施细则》的修改，特批复如下，盼遵照执行。
本批发第一项、第四项由你局在1995年12月15日前发布。第二项、第三项由你局在一九九八年十一月一前发布。
国务院
1995年4月23日制发
①标题不完整
②缺主送机关
③"大致同意"用法不当
④实施细则应用全称
⑤语气不当"盼......" ⑥"一九九八......"表达错误
⑦作者位置不当
⑧"制发"二字多余。
中国人民银行市分行
关于转发总行《储蓄工作座谈会纪要》的通知 银发[2002]号
现将总行的《储蓄工作座谈会纪要》转发给你们，请立即组织研究，展开讨论，并根据《纪要》精神，认真贯彻执行。当前，首先要抓好第一季度的工作，以便为全年工作打下基础。
中国人民银行市分行 二〇〇二年七月二十四日
一般来说，转发性通知只能有一个目的，或为执行，或为讨论，或为参考，二者不能兼得，更不能三者兼得。上面这则通知一方面让人家“研究讨论”，一方面又让人家“贯彻执行”，这二者是不可兼得的。因为“研究讨论”意味着转发对象尚不成熟，还没有达到“执行”的程度;而“贯彻执行”却意味着转发对象已经成熟，已经没有“研究讨论”的必要了。作者在这里显然犯了自相矛盾的错误，违背了形式逻辑中的不矛盾律。这是转发性通知中的一种多发病和常见病。
镇人民政府：
对你镇的数次请示，经研究作答复如下：
其一，原则同意批准你镇建立联合贸易公司，负责本镇的内、外贸易工作。你镇应尽快使联合贸易公司开始营业。
其二，你镇提出试行“关于违反计划生育规定的处罚办法”最好不执行，因为这个办法违反上级有关文件精神。
其三，对你镇提出要建一俱乐部活跃居民文化生活一事，予以批准，但规模要适当控制，量力而行。
其四，同意你镇组团参加在上海举办的服装节和在服装节上进行引资促销活动。
市人民政府
2001年月日
一是违反一文一批的原则。市政府在积存了某乡四件请示之后，才合在一起给了这样一个批复，这样做有多种弊端：(1)延误时间，耽误下级工作;(2)多种事项集于一篇公文之中，内容杂乱;(3)一份公文涉及多方面工作，给下级落实带来困难。因为这些工作在下级机关是由不同单位和不同负责人分管的，由哪个负责人承担批复的落实工作，不好确定。正确的做法是，下级报来一份请示，就及时回复一份批复。对方的四份请求，应有四份相应的批复。
二是标题不合要求。本批复的标题只有文种品称，没有发文机关和主要内容，不够认真严肃，也影响工作效率。
三是用语含糊不清，观点不明确。如“原则同意”、“最好不执行”、“违反上级有关文件精神”，都没有明确指出自己的观点，使下级无法执行。 四是时间要用汉字，不能用阿拉伯数字。
市工业局文件 字(2002)号 签发人：张平
市工业局关于印发“关于节减行政经费的几项规定”的通知
我局同意市财政局关于节减行政经费的几项规定”中提出的意见，认为切实可行，请结合本单位的情况参照执行。
附：市财政局文件
2002.10.16 主题词：印发、规定、通知
抄送：市人民政府、市财政局
(1)发文字号不规范，应为〔2002〕23号;
(2)下行文不应标注签发人，应取消，发文字号居中排列;
(3)标题不规范，应将“印发”改为“转发”，引号应改为书名号《》; (4)缺主送机关，应写明收文单位名称;
(5)转发同级机关公文，不应用批示语气，如“我局同意”、“所提意见切实可行”等; (6)《规定》属规范性公文，应认真执行而不应写“参照”执行; (7)附件说明不规范，应具体写明附件的标题;
(8)成文日期不规范，应用汉字写全年月日，即二〇〇二年十月十六日;应加盖印章; (9)主题词不规范，应表明公文的主题项：行政经费;主题词之间空一个汉字位置，不用标点符号;
(10)转发公文不应再向其他机关抄送，应取消抄送机关。
各省、自治区、直辖市人民政府： 今年初，枝江县董镇信用社职工同志为保卫国家财产，面对英勇歹徒，顽强搏斗，最后擒获歹徒。为此决定：授予同志先进工作者称号。 国务院希望各条战线的群众、工人、农民、知识分子认真贯彻十三届四中、5中、6中全会精神，胸怀全局，艰苦奋斗，努力工作，为社会主义现代化建设做出更大贡献。
中共中央、国务院90年4月24日
1.标题结构不完整，应改为“中共中央、国务院关于授予同志先进工作者称号的决定”。 2.“今年初”这一时间概念表达不当，应改为“1990年初”。 3.枝江县前应冠以省名。 4.“英勇歹徒”的表达有误。
5.“群众、工人、”等搭配不当。 6.数字表达不一致，不应用阿拉伯数字。 7.作者排列有误，应分两行排列。 8.日期书写有误，应用汉字。
公文改错题(找出下列公文中的错误并说明理由，本题10分。)
关于申请拨给灾区贷款专项指标的报告
省行：
江两岸乡、村同时发生洪水，灾情严重。经初步不完全统计，农田受灾总面积达38000多亩，各种农作物损失达100多万元，农民个人损失也很大。灾后，我们立即深入灾区了解灾情，并发动干部群众积极开展生产自救。同时，为帮助受灾农民及时恢复生产，我们采取了下列措施：
一、对恢复生产所需的资金，以自筹为主。确有困难的，先从现有农贷指标中贷款支持。
二、对受灾严重的困难户，优先适当贷款，先帮助他们解决生活问题。到月日止，此项贷款已达万元。
由于这次灾情过于严重，集体和个人的损失都很大，短期内恢复生产有一定的困难，仅靠正常农贷指标难以解决问题。为此，请省行下达专项救灾贷款指标万元，以便支持灾区迅速恢复生产。
以上报告当否，请批示。
银行市支行
一九九八年月日
一、文种选择有误
从标题看，这篇公文是向省行提出灾区贷款专项指标的申请，目的是获得省行的批准。从正文的主体部分看，两条措施确属报告性质，但随后出现的专项贷款请求，就不是报告应有的内容了。从结语看，“以上报告妥否，请批示”，有着很强的期复性。因此，综合起来看，这篇公文应改为《关于拨给灾区贷款专项指标的请示》。
二、内容含糊
这是由于原文混淆了报告和请示的界限而造成的。写请示，只需写明请示缘由、请示事项，最后提出请示要求即可，与此无关的内容不应写入。而原文提出的两条措施：“对恢复生产所需的资金，以自筹为主”、“对受灾严重的困难户，优先适当贷款”，既不是请示缘由，也不是请示事项，不应该写入文中。
三、语言不准确
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38、插科打浑(
040、要言不繁(
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42、仗义直言(
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44、委屈求全(
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52、真知卓见(
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53、谍谍不休(
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54、虚无飘渺(
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55、甘败下风(
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56、出类拔萃(
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57、蓬筚生辉(
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59、谋取暴利(
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3、相辅相成(
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5、谈笑风声(
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7、沸反盈天(
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9、政权颠复(
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1、无礼漫骂(
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3、冒然行事(
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5、按价赔尝(
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7、图书装祯(
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9、山青水秀(
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1、民生凋蔽(
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3、水乳交溶(
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5、应接不遐(
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7、冒天下之大不违(
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9、飞扬拔扈(
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3、单精竭虑(
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5、喜皮笑脸(
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7、各行其是(
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060、流览一遍(
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2、磬竹难书(
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4、好景不常(
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6、请予接恰(
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8、到处传颂(
070、提心掉胆(
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2、言谈恢谐(
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4、很有俾益(
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6、沾污名誉(
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8、大声急呼(
080、战胜朝庭(
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2、旁证博引(
08
4、事必躬亲(
08
6、违法造事(
08
8、共商国是(
090、分道扬镖(
09
2、厝火积薪(
09
4、嘻笑怒骂(
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6、远大报负(
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8、佩戴手饰(
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中考语文成语改错200题(101-150)
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1、璀灿夺目(
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2、德艺双磬(
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3、心头烦燥(
)
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4、皮肤皲裂(
)
10
5、厉兵秣马(
)
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6、万里平筹(
)
10
7、高潮叠起(
)
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8、惹事生非(
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9、群英汇萃(
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11、淹没无闻(
1
13、沤心沥血(
1
15、欢心鼓舞(
1
17、长备不懈(
1
19、不容质疑(
1
21、举止安祥(
1
23、一张一驰(
1
25、磨肩接踵(
1
27、果断决择(
1
29、良晨美景(
1
31、偷盗消脏(
1
33、针贬时敝(
1
35、怵目惊心(
1
37、若既若离(
1
39、棉里藏针(
1
41、额首称庆(
1
43、剑拔驽张(
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45、匪贻所思(
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47、为虎作昌(
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110、胸无城府(
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14、千锤百练(
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16、声名雀起(
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18、引疚辞职(
120、百战不怠(
1
22、味同嚼腊(
1
24、束之高搁(
1
26、功亏一溃(
1
28、茅屋修茸(
130、赋与使命(
1
32、材料翔实(
1
34、频临破产(
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36、金榜提名(
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38、与日具增(
140、晓勇无敌(
1
42、不循私情(
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44、粼次栉比(
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46、残无人道(
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中考语文成语改错200题(151-200)
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51、编篡字典(
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52、尚待商确(
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53、捉发难数(
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1
54、毕竟不同(
) 1
55、勤能补绌(
)
1
56、朴朔迷离(
) 1
57、天翻地复(
)
1
58、顶力相助(
)
1
59、笑容可鞠(
16
1、面面相去(
16
3、咸口不言(
16
5、浑浑恶恶(
16
7、不径而走(
16
9、风声鹤泪(
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1、人情事故(
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3、园舞曲
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5、工程峻工(
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7、震聋发聩(
17
9、壁立千刃(
18
1、风糜一时(
18
3、名门旺族(
18
5、工程剪彩(
18
7、入不付出(
18
9、蜂涌而来(
19
1、一语破敌(
19
3、含辛如苦(
19
5、相反相承(
19
7、心心相映(
19
9、同仇敌慨(
160、置若往闻(
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2、不记其数(
16
4、遗笑大方(
16
6、烦文褥节(
16
8、矫柔造作(
170、流言飞语(
17
2、堪误校正(
17
4、九宵云外(
17
6、卑恭屈膝(
17
8、巧夺天功(
180、焕然冰释(
18
2、成绩蜚然(
18
4、标新立意(
18
6、火中取粟(
18
8、张慌失措(
190、销脏灭迹(
19
2、严惩不怠(
19
4、买犊还珠(
19
6、粗制烂造(
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8、一愁莫展(
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2012级中考语文成语改错练习200题
参考答案
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1、关怀备至
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2、随声附和
0
3、乔装打扮。
0
4、记忆犹新
0
5、铤而走险
0
6、融会贯通
0
7、并行不悖
0
8、略见一斑
0
9、宽宏大度
10、无耻谰言
11、世外桃源
12、伶牙俐齿
13、汗流浃背
14、哄堂大笑
15、名列前茅
16、(正确)
17、挑拔是非
18、歪风邪气
19、墨守成规
20、待价而沽：沽，卖。等有好价钱才卖。比喻谁给好的待遇就替谁工作。
21、走投无路
22、(正确)
23、首屈一指：首，首先;屈，弯曲。屈指计算，首先弯曲拇指。表示第一，居首位。
24、(正确)也可作"众口铄金"。
25、《史记?张仪列传》："众口铄金，积毁销骨。"
26、行踪诡密
27、出奇制胜：奇，奇兵，奇计;制，制服。出奇兵战胜敌人。比喻用对方意料不到的方法取得胜利。
28、好高骛远：好，喜欢;骛，追求。比喻不切实际地追求过高过远的目标;与趋之若鹜的"鹜"不同。
29、(正确)也可写作"杯盘狼藉"。
30、精兵简政
31、蛊惑人心
32、 眼花缭乱
33、披星戴月
34、陈词滥调
35、销声匿迹
36、不醒人事
37、震撼人心
38、插科打诨
39、截然不同
40、要言不烦
41、层峦叠嶂
42、仗义执言
43、既往不咎
44、委曲求全
45、明火执仗。点着火把，拿着武器。原指公开抢劫。后比喻公开地、毫不隐藏地干坏事。
46、弥天大罪
47、张皇失措
48、火势蔓延
49、饱经沧桑
50、无精打采
51、噤若寒蝉：噤：闭口不作声。象深秋的蝉那样一声不吭。比喻因害怕有所顾虑而不敢说话。"他的话完了，台下有几个人拚命地高声鼓掌，而更多的人却～、面面相觑。"(杨沫《青春之歌》第二部第三十八章)
52、真知灼见
53、喋喋不休
54、虚无缥缈
55、甘拜下风
56、(正确)
57、蓬筚生辉：(正确)蓬，蓬草;荜，用竹子、荆条等编成的篱笆等物。蓬筚，也作"蓬荜"，蓬门筚门的略语，比喻穷人住的房子。草屋也发出了光辉。用以称谢他人过访之词。蓬筚生辉，也作"蓬筚增辉"。
58、计日程功。程，估量;功，成效。可以按日子来计算功效。形容进展快，成功指日可待。
59、牟取暴利
60、浏览一遍 6
1、大学肄业
62、罄竹难书
63、(正确)
64、好景不长：好的光景不永远存在。
6
5、谈笑风生
66、请予接洽
67、(正确)
6
8、到处传诵
69、政权颠覆
70、提心吊胆
71、无礼谩骂
7
2、言谈诙谐
7
3、贸然行事
7
4、很有裨益
75、按价赔偿
7
6、玷污名誉
7
7、图书装帧
7
8、大声疾呼
79、山清水秀
80、战胜朝廷
81、民生凋敝
82、旁征博引：旁，广泛;征，寻求;博，广博;引，引证。指说话、写文章引用材料作为依据或例证。
83、水乳交融
84、(正确)躬亲：亲自。不论什么事一定要亲自去做，亲自过问。形容办事认真，毫不懈怠。
85、应接不暇
8
6、违法肇事
8
7、冒天下之大不韪
88、(正确)
8
9、飞扬跋扈：飞扬，放纵;跋扈，蛮横。原指意态狂豪，不爱约束。现多形容骄横放肆，目中无人。
90、分道扬镳：分路而行。比喻目标不同，各走各的路或各干各的事。 9
1、(正确)断烂，形容陈腐杂乱;朝报，古代传抄皇帝诏令和官员奏章之类的文件。指陈旧、残缺，没有参考价值的历史记载。
92、(正确)厝，同"措"，放置;薪：柴草。把火放到柴堆下面。比喻潜伏着很大危险。
93、 殚精竭虑。
9
4、嬉笑怒骂
95、嘻皮笑脸
9
6、远大抱负
97、各行其是
98、佩戴首饰
9
9、私下磋商
100、(正确) 10
1、璀璨夺目
10
2、德艺双馨
10
3、心头烦躁
10
4、(正确)也写作龟裂。
10
5、厉兵秣马。厉，磨兵器;秣，喂战马。指做好战前准备。
10
6、万里平畴。畴，田野。
10
7、高潮迭起
10
8、惹是生非
10
9、群英荟萃
110、(正确)
1
11、湮没无闻
1
12、徇私舞弊
1
13、呕心沥血
1
14、千锤百炼
1
15、欢欣鼓舞
1
16、声名鹊起
1
17、常备不懈
1
18、引咎辞职
1
19、不容置疑
120、百战不殆
1
21、举止安详
1
22、味同嚼蜡
1
23、一张一弛
1
24、束之高阁
1
25、摩肩接踵
1
26、功亏一篑
1
27、果断抉择
1
28、茅屋修葺
1
29、良辰美景
130、赋予使命
1
31、偷盗销脏
1
32、(正确)
1
33、针砭时弊
1
34、濒临破产
1
35、触目惊心
1
36、金榜题名
1
37、若即若离
1
38、与日俱增
1
39、绵里藏针。原比喻外貌和善，内心刻毒。也比喻外表和善，但内心坚忍。 140、骁勇无敌
1
41、额手称庆。以手加额，表示庆幸。也作"额手称颂"。
1
42、不徇私情
1
43、剑拔弩张
1
44、粼次栉比
1
45、匪夷所思。不是根据一般常理可以想象得到的。夷，平常。 1
46、惨无人道
1
47、为虎作伥
1
48、渔翁得利
1
49、呱呱坠地
150、一抔黄土
1
51、编纂字典
1
52、尚待商榷
1
53、擢发难数
1
54、(正确)
1
55、勤能补拙
1
56、扑朔迷离
1
57、天翻地覆
1
58、鼎力相助
1
59、笑容可掬
160、置若罔闻
16
1、面面相觑
16
2、不计其数
16
3、缄口不言
16
4、贻笑大方
16
5、浑浑噩噩。浑浑，浑厚的样子;噩噩，严正的样子。形容浑朴天真，严肃敦厚;也形容浑沌无知，愚昧糊涂。
16
6、繁文褥节
16
7、不胫而走
16
8、矫揉造作
16
9、风声鹤唳。听到风声鹤都惧怕，形容极端惊恐疑惧。
170、流言蜚语
17
1、人情世故
17
2、勘误校正
17
3、圆舞曲
17
4、九霄云外
17
5、工程竣工
17
6、卑躬屈膝
17
7、振聋发聩
17
8、巧夺天工
17
9、壁立千仞
180、涣然冰释。意象冰块消融流散，比喻疑虑、误会、隔阂一下子完全消除。 18
1、风靡一时
18
2、成绩斐然
18
3、名门望族
18
4、标新立异
18
5、(正确)
18
6、火中取栗。法国寓言：一只猴子和一只猫，看见炉中烤着栗子，猴子叫猫从火中取栗，被猴子吃了，而猫爪上的毛却被烧去。比喻为别人冒险，徒然吃苦而得不到好处。
18
7、入不敷出
18
8、张皇失措
18
9、蜂拥而来
190、销赃灭迹
19
1、一语破的。的，箭靶中心，比喻关键。一句话就说中了要害。
19
2、严惩不贷。贷，宽恕。
19
3、含辛茹苦
19
4、买椟还珠
19
5、相反相成。事物有相互依赖、相互促成的一面。
19
6、粗制滥造
19
7、心心相印。心，心意，思想感情;印，契合。形容心意相通，感情一致。
19
8、一筹莫展。
19
9、同仇敌忾
短文改错试题范文第3篇
1 March 29th, Dear Diary, I’m writing this at my room. It’s almost midnight and I have to getting up early tomorrow, but I can’t sleep. I’m thinking about my future! Every day, my parents asks me, “What do you want to be when you grow?” The problem is: I don’t know! My mom always says, “Be a doctor!” And she doesn’t understand to be a doctor, you have to study for a long, long time and that’s not her idea of fun. Also I’m really bad at biology at the school. My dad says, “Be a pilot!” Is he crazy? He knew I hate flying!
Now I’m getting tiring, so I’m going to bed. I can think about my future in bed. I get my best ideas when I’m lain down.
I have known my friend Rebecca for a long time. We firstly met at a friend’s birthday party five years before. We found out that we both liked singing and dancing, so I invited Rebecca over to my place. We listened to the music together and soon became best friends. Three years ago, Rebecca’s parents invited me go on holiday with them. It is great. We spent three wonderful weeks in a little cottage. Rebecca and I loved walking along the beautifully beach. We took a lot of photos and had a lot of funs. Last year, Rebecca’s father changed her job, and they moved to other town. Since then we haven’t seen each other very much, but we’ve talked in the phone and we’ve written emails to each other.
3 Dear Joe, How are you? Thanks to your post good to know when you’re OK. I’ve got news too. I’m going on holiday next weeks with my brother and Anna, a friend from school. We’re going to stay on a farm with four days! We’re going to look after the animals and doing some horse-riding. I’m sure I’ll love it. You know how crazy I am about the animals! I want to learn all about the cows or the horses. I hope I will have some times to go walking in the hills, too. Well, right now I’m going to finish homework lots to do before the holiday! I’ll write to you when I get back to telling you about my holiday.
Yours, 4 Nadia People had always been interested in bees. This interest may have begun with the honey what bees make. In the fact, it has been found that people have been eating honey for thousand of years. In the more recently past, people were interested in the way bees made honey. They admired the way bees seemed
1 to working so hard. Some languages even developed expressions about people working like bees. In English, for example, we talk with a “busy bee”. Now scientists has a new reason to be interested in bees. They have discovered that bees able to communicate with each other. Research has revealed some surprised facts about this, but there are still many mysteries.
Yesterday afternoon, I took the No. 6 bus to go home. It was crowded on the bus, and I had listened to music by my earphones. Suddenly I saw the name of the bus stop that I should get off, so I got off the bus in hurry. When I arrived home, I realized that I had left my bag on the bus. My ID card and ten books were in the bag. I was worried and eager to finding it, so I went to the bus companies for help. Fortunate, at the Lost and Found, I see my bag. I wanted to thank the person who had found my bag, and the staff there said the person hadn’t left his name. How a good man!
I read an interested piece of news on a newspaper today. According to Professor Richard Wiseman, only less than a quarter of the British achieved their New Year goals because they do it in the wrong way. He studied 700 volunteers who made a wide ranges of New Year goals, including quitting smoking, losing the weight, or gaining a qualification. Just 22 percent of the participants managed to meeting their goals or described their progress like “very successful.” The reason so much failed was that they took the wrong approach and led by self-help books in the wrong way. They tended to spend a lot of time on thinking about the “bad things” what would happen if they did not achieve their goals instead of taking action.
Last weekends, I went shopping by myself. It was a sunny day and I feel very happy. When I had bought anything I needed, I went to the bus stop to take a bus. Unfortunately, there were too much people at the bus stop. Then it was my turn to get on, there was no room. I had to wait the next bus. Suddenly, it started to rain. I had no choice but to call a taxi. Half way through the journey, the taxi was broke down. I was filled with angry when I saw an emptier bus go by. Finally, I decided to walk home in a rain. What an unlucky day!
My name is Li Hua and I wanted to be class monitor. I am responsible, sociable, or easy-going. I enjoy serving others. Additionally, I have vary interests. I love singing and playing the drums as well soccer. I am also a good listener and be always open to different opinions. I am confident that I can do the job good. Being a student myself, firstly, I will create an academic atmosphere so that everyone in our classes can
2 improve their studies. For those students who is falling behind, I will find ways to help them to catch up. Secondly, I will serve as a bridge among teachers and students. Finally, I will arrange parties so we can relax. I believe I am the right person to this post.
Dear Sarah, I’m writing because I want to apologize to what I did last week. I’m really sorry. I know we said 8:30, and I would’ve gotten here on time if everything hadn’t gone wrongly. I was late because my watch broke and I didn’t know what the time it was. So you see, I would’ve arrived on time if my watch hadn’t broken. Then I have to walk because I’d missed the bus. And then I fell over and my trousers got dirty, so I had to go home and get changing. Then I decided to catch another buses, but it was too late. I would have phoned you and my brother had taken my mobile phone. Anyway, I hope you aren’t too angrier with me. Hope to hear you soon.
Yours, Jack
Today my classmate and I went to a farm for a trip. I get up at six o’clock and we set off by bus. On the bus, some of us sang, and some of us talked. We all had good time. Two hours late, we arrived at the gate of the farm, that the farmers were waiting to give us a warm welcome. After we were shown around the big farm, they began to plant trees. It was really a good way to getting close to nature and protect the environment at the same time. Next, we had a picnic and it was great fun to eat on the open air. Finally, we went home at half past four. Although all of us was tired, our trip was really very more unforgettable.
Both my father and mother has been wanting me to study abroad. They think that it’s natural to master a foreign language in an English-speaking country and that studying abroad at early age will enable me to be dependent. Moreover, it will be easier to me to gain advanced knowledge of technology, that will prepare me for a brighter future. Moreover, my good friend, Zhang Hua doesn’t agree with them. He thought my English is too limited to communicate with foreigners. Besides, the cost is too much for his family. In my opinions, I should continue to study in China. As long as I study hard at now, I’ll make great achievements in the future.
3 Advertising informs consumers about newer products available on the market. It gives us information with everything from shampoo to toothpaste to computers and cars. But there is one serious problems with this. The information are actually very often misinformation. It tells us the products’ benefits but hides its disadvantages. Advertising not only leads us to buying things that we don’t need and can’t afford, but it confuses our sense reality. “Zoom toothpaste prevents bad teeth and gives you the white teeth!” the advertisement tells us. And it doesn’t tell us the complete truth that a health diet and a good toothbrush will have the same effect.
My grandfather had had enough of his cat. He was tired of her scratching all the furnitures and made a mess. So he gave her to a friend, who lived on the other side of town. He told his friends that he was getting so old to look after her. A week later, in a very cold winter day, my grandfather returned home from shopping and surprised to see the cat on his doorstep. My grandfather was moved by the fact that his pet had found his way back from the other side of town in such a cold weather. He took the cat outside and gave her lots of loving attention. He decided he will never give her away again.
Bedouin, the Arab people who live in the desert, living in a traditional society. This means they live on much the same way as their ancestors did. People who live in traditional societies has strong ties to the past. Customs and beliefs have changed very slower. They fear that when changes will make their lives worse rather than better. Values are passing on with little changes from one generation to the next. Yet changes do take place. All cultures change, but they change much quickly at some periods than at other. In very recent years, changes have taken place very quickly everywhere, including deserts of Southwest Asia and North Africa.
My uncle and aunt come home one evening and discovered huge hole in their roof. They also found that their dog was dead and their furniture were covered in horrible-smelling matter. Upset by which they saw, they phoned the police. After the police looked into the problem, they were told what had happened to. It seemed that the container holding the wastes from the toilets on a passing plane had burst openly. The contents froze in the atmosphere as it fell towards the ground. Then the resulting block of ice crashed through the roof and broke into piece, killing the dog after melting in their house.
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Taking parts in recreation activities help us keep fit. There are various kinds of activity in our daily life, for example, listening to music, watching TV, playing chess, or going to cinema. But I think we’d better to have more outdoor activities. As students, we usually sit too longer in the classroom, and as a result our eyes and brains getting tired. But it’s a good idea to play basketball, football, table tennis, go swimming, do some runnings, or even go for a picnic. Our brains also need changes to make it smart and active. In a word, exercise is good for the health.
Dear Sandra, You’ll never guess where I’m writing this email. A cave! You know we’re on holidays in Spain. Well, we spend a few days in Barcelona first. We had a good time there, though one day I didn’t feel very good. I think I ate too much ice cream the day before. Anyway, when I left Barcelona, we came to spend a few days in Granada. However, we couldn’t get a hotel too many tourists and not enough bed! Then the hotel owner said, “Why don’t try the cave hotels?” We thought he were joking. Living in caves? But there we are and it’s wonderful. We’re enjoying it much that we don’t know when we’re going to leave. We’re never going to have enough time to explore for everything. Take care!
Ben
My uncle buys a satellite dish, which is a large round piece of metal that receives satellite television. He decided to set up himself. He climbed up the ladder and attached the dish with the side of his houses. After he finishing, he and my aunt relaxed for the evening in front of the TV. The next day was very much hot, and they decided to stay at home and watch TV. That afternoon they heard lots of shouting outside. When they went outside, they saw that the house opposite were on fire. Fortunately, the fire was putting out. It turned out that the fire had started because my uncle’s satellite dish had been concentrating the sun’s rays on the curtains of her neighbor’s house but had caused the fire.
Christmas is supposed to be a time express our love and goodwill towards others. It is supposed to be a time which we perform acts of kindness for people less fortunate to ourselves. But do we think of the other people when we sat down to our Christmas dinner? Of course not we’re too busy eating those delicious foods related with Christmas. We are too busy wondering that the presents we gave were as nice or better
5 than the one we received. They forget to think of the sick and the homeless. The whole idea of Christmas has complete changed. What a shame!
A thief broke into our house and filled his bag by our possessions when he suddenly feeling a pair of eyes on him. Looking up, he sees an eagle staring at him with cold, merciless eyes. At first the man was too frightening to move, but after ten minute he tried moving quietly towards the door. Therefore, the eyes just followed him and he couldn’t move. Eventually, my parents returned to and found the thief in our house. When my father turned the light, the thief could see that the eagle was just a toy. But it was too late and she was arrested. My father said that the toy eagle were better than any watchdog.
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Nowadays more and more students were found cheating in exams. Some copy from each other; some copy from their text books, reference books or prepared note; others use modern communication tool such as mobile phones. Cheating in exams will cause some worse effects. For one thing, it will result unfair competition and destroy the creativity of bright students. For another, students who often cheats in exams will develop bad habits and won’t be able to meet the needs of society in the future. So how can cheating in exams be stopped? On my opinion, severe punishments should be put into the effect to prevent students from cheating. At the same time, great efforts should be made to make students understood what kind of person society needs or try to build up their honesty.
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Dear Jack, I’m glad to learn that you will come Beijing to learn about Chinese culture as an exchange student. At the moment, I am studying English in my school but I always get better grades in my class. I’m good at the spoken English, so I’m sure I will communicate with you frequent. Beside, my parents are open and kind and is friends with many of my classmates. I believe you will be one of their friend too. Therefore, I invite you to live in my home during you stay in Beijing. I’m willing to helping you as much as I can.
Best wishes!
Yours, Li Hua
短文改错试题范文第4篇
课前活动:
让学生自己读课文,并查出文中不会读的生字词,根据课文注释,疏通文意.
学习目标：
在学生充分预习的基础上,掌握常用文言词语，理解课文大意。 品味优美语言，理解作品意境，体会文章蕴含的思想感情.并在朗读课文的基础上，熟读成诵，培养学生的文言语感。 重难点：
重点：积累文言词语，学习写景状物的方法。引导学生感受作品优美的意境，体会作品中流露的思想感情。
难点：品味文章画面的精美、语言的精练及布局的匠心所在，提高学生初步鉴赏文学作品的能力。
课时安排:2课时.
教学过程与方法：
第一课时
一、导入揭题：
古人云“仁者乐山，智者乐水”。山水景物曾经引起了古今无数文人墨客的无限情思，请同学们搜索自己的记忆库，背诵一些描写祖国壮丽山河的诗文。(《望岳》、《沁园春雪》、《与朱元思书》、《湖心亭看雪》等)今天我们又将一起欣赏一篇六朝山水小品名作《答谢中书书》。
师生共同赏读《答谢中书书》.。以背诵为突破口，指导学生美读课文;在反复诵读中，整体感知文意;激发学生的想象，再现画面，引导学生感受文章的诗情画意;深入研读课文，体会作者的思想感情。
二、明确学习目标：
在学生充分预习的基础上,掌握常用文言词语，理解课文大意。 品味优美语言，理解作品意境，体会文章蕴含的思想感情.并在朗读课文的基础上，熟读成诵，培养学生的文言语感。
三、学生自主学习,师生互动,教师精讲点拨：
自学指导
(一)
1,检查学生的预习情况.
2、学生自己书写标题，解题，了解作者的有关情况。
书即书信，古人的书信又叫“尺牍”或日“信札”，是一种应用性文体。
有关作家作品介绍：齐高帝曾经召陶弘景进宫陪伴太子读书。后来，陶弘景远离尘世，隐居句曲山(今茅山)。他精通阴阳五行、山川地理、天文气象。梁武帝继位后，他“礼聘不 出”。因此，每逢有凶吉、祭祀、征讨大事，朝廷都要派人进山向他请教，故称他为“山中宰相”。陶一生好松。每当轻风吹拂松枝，发出“沙沙”的声响时，他就像听到fllI乐一样如痴如狂。有时，他竟一人进山，专去听山野松涛之声，人又称之“仙人”。
2、谢中书即谢征，字元度，陈郡阳夏人，曾作中书鸿胪，所以称之为谢中书。陶弘景给谢征的这封回信，称道江南山水之美，笔笼山川，纸纳四时，文辞清丽，为六朝山水小品名作。
(把书写标题及解题的权利教给学生，教师从旁补充，意在强化学生是学习的主体这一意识。)
自学指导
(二)
1、反复诵读，师生探讨背诵的方法
(1)指名读，弄懂字音，大致把握骈文的朗读节奏。
(2)教师有感情地背诵全文。
(3)教师提问：根据你们学习文言文的经验，如若要求大家很快将短文背下来，你有什么好办法? 教师总结：翻译记忆法(在读懂词句含义的基础上记忆); 情境再现法(将内容想象为丰富的画面方便记忆);举纲张目法(抓住文章脉络记诵，就能条理清晰地记住全文内容);关键词句记忆法(抓住句中一些关键的字词带动全句的记忆)。
2、利用翻译记忆法，初背全文
(1)学生结合课下注释，疏通文意。
学生圈点短文中的重点字词，结合注释翻译全文。如有拿不准的可以与同桌商量，仍然无法解决的可以直接写在黑板上老师预留的地方。
(2)教师明确重点字词。
五色交辉：交相辉映 晓雾将歇：消散 夕阳欲颓：坠落 四时俱备：都 能与其奇者：参与;杰出
(3)请一个小组接龙翻译短文。
(4)学生尝试背诵短文。(若不能背可以读文) (这一环节其主要目的仍是落实文言字词的积累，为学生打好扎实的文言基本功打基础。)
自学指导
(三)
1、品读短文，感受文字魅力，再背短文
(1)、理清短文结构层次，尝试背诵短文。
师：有的同学记性不错，已经背的八九不离十，有的同学还需努力。为了方便记忆，我们不妨一起看看作者是按怎样的思路来写的。
“山川之美，古来共谈”总领全文，从古至今，以“共谈”概说人人皆爱，以“美”点明全文中心。当中部分则具体叙写山川之美。最后殿以“实是欲界之仙都，自康乐以来，未复有能与其奇者”，先以感叹总括前文，复以名人证实此说。这样，首尾呼应，议叙结合，使文章主体部分更为鲜明突出。文中的写景部分，先仰视“高峰人云”，再俯瞰“清流见底”，复平看“两岸石壁”、“青林翠竹”，最后又分“晓”与“夕”两层来写，一句一景，一景一意，次序井然。
2、小组竞赛，美诵短文，体会作者的思想感情
(1)小组接龙训练背诵短文，推出一名组员参加比赛。
(2)、小组间开展竞赛，有感情地背诵全文。
3.在评点中自然总结出文中所体现出的作者的思想感情。
表达了作者沉醉山水的愉悦之情和与古今知音共赏美景的得意之感。作者对山川风物的审美感受。
(这一环节以多种形式的诵读来调动学生诵读的热情，同时启发学生准确把握作者的思想感情并运用一定的诵读技巧将之表现出来。当短文在学生的诵读中焕发出生命的时候，文言的魅力就以最恰当的方式感染了学生。)
四、当堂训练：
1.将这篇短文声情并茂地吟诵给父母听。
2.预习《记承天寺夜游》。
第二课时
一,导入解题:
回顾上节课的知识.
二、明确学习目标：
在学生充分预习的基础上,掌握常用文言词语，理解课文大意。 品味优美语言，理解作品意境，体会文章蕴含的思想感情.并在朗读课文的基础上，熟读成诵，培养学生的文言语感。
三、学生自主学习,师生互动,教师精讲点拨：
自学指导
(一)
1.用自己喜欢的方式大声朗读课文，借助页下注释，读准字音。
2.向大家推荐认为值得积累或要引起注意的字词。提出自己拿不准的字词请求帮助。
教师提示一些重要词语，帮助学生理解文句。
①念无与为乐者，遂至承天寺寻张怀民。
念：想 遂：于是，便 至：到
②庭下如积水空明，水中藻、荇交横，盖竹柏影也。
盖：原来
③但少闲人如吾两人者耳。
但：只
3.请学生翻译全文，要求其余学生能做出中肯评价。
4.全班齐读短文，要求字音准确，句读恰当。
(考虑到本文篇幅不长且难于理解的字词不多，因此本文对于文言基础知识的落实以交流预习成果的形式展开，这样可以有更多的时间用于诵读，体会作者情感，同时也培养学生自主学习文言的兴趣及能力。)
自学指导
(二)
1、请同学说说对苏轼的了解。
苏轼是北宋著名的文学家、书画家。工诗擅词，散文汪洋恣肆，有“雄视百代”的称誉。《记承天寺夜游》写于他谪居湖北黄州之时。
2、文中哪一个词可以让我们看出苏轼此时的处境?如何理解“闲人”一词的含义?苏轼心情如何?
苏轼以犯人身份贬黄州，无薪俸，故租50亩荒地经营。有诗日：“不令寸土闲，饥寒未知免。”“去年东坡拾瓦砾，自种黄桑三百尺。今年刈草盖雪堂，日炙风吹面如墨。”又有“自笑平生为口忙”之旬。苏轼要养活一家老小，好像很忙啊。要开荒种地，要种麻植桑，还要造房子，为糊口奔忙。他是闲人吗? “闲人”，即清闲的人，这里并非是指闲极无聊、无所事事的人，而是包含着复杂的意味。这里的“闲人”指具有闲情雅致的人。
3、从文中哪些词句中可以看出作者的心情? 提示学生揣摩下列句子，边读边品，分析句中流露了作者什么样的思想感情。
①月色人户，欣然起行。
见“月色如户”，则“欣然起行”，欢欣之情，溢于言表。
②念无与为乐者，遂至承天寺寻张怀民。
提示：为什么独寻张怀民? ③怀民亦未寝，相与步于中庭。
“亦”字显示出“心有灵犀一点通”，同好相知的喜悦。相知好友相携同步漫游赏月，流露出十分恬适的心绪。
④何夜无月?何处无竹柏?但少闲人如吾两人者耳。
考虑作者当时的处境。“闲”相对于“忙”来说的，由于贬官谪居，自然不像在京城时公务缠身。一个“闲”字包含着作者几多感慨，有贬谪的悲凉，有失意的落寞，有自我排遣的达观，还有悠闲赏月的欣喜。
3.学生齐读四句话，体会作者复杂的思想感情。
(这一环节直接从“闲人”一词切入，在整体把握作者情致的基础上，再逐句抓住重点字词品读作者的情感。教学中，始终要将读和悟紧密结合，并且教师要努力营造出良好的交流探究的气氛。)
自学指导
(三)
1.“一切景语皆情语”，有这样一种赏景的心情，看看作者眼中的景致又是如何。请大家找出文中描写月色的句子，有表情地诵读。 (积水空明，水中藻、荇交横，盖竹柏影也。)
2.提问：全句无一“月”字，而又无一字不在写“月”，请分析这样写的妙处。
学生想象画面，思考。
明确：先写月色，“积水空明”，一泓积水清澈透明，可以推想见月色之明;继写水中之物，“藻、荇交横”，纵横交错，摇曳生姿，可以推想见月色之美;而积水空明和藻、荇交横，相映生色，互相烘染，就平添了月夜夜游的美景了。最后点出“盖竹柏影也”可以推想见月色之浓。夜游因月而起，处处扣月;写月又不浓墨重彩，而是轻点几笔，境界全出;写月，不明写，而从竹柏影人手。作者无疑是咏月的丹青妙手，这一幅月夜小景确实美妙绝伦。
3、反复诵读，深入理解作者的情感
(1)、作者描绘的美景中哪一个词最能体现出作者当时的心情呢?读写景句子。
抓住“空明”突出心的干净、澄澈如水。
(2)、心静如水，多好的评价啊。设若教师在作者写景的基础上续一句诗文，大家来看看哪一句最合适。
①丛中蛙鸣一片。②院外遥闻几声狗吠。③几处纳凉人笑语阵阵。④空中流萤飞舞。 (学生先独自思考，然后小组交流探究。) 师：正如大家的意见，因为苏轼描写的夜景是宁静淡雅的，这4句中任何一句添加进去，都打破了这种气氛。作者在这时候的心情就像他描写的景色一样宁静、深远。
四、当堂训练：
1.诵读两篇短文。
2.这两篇短文意韵隽永，富有诗情画意，就其中一篇写一段读后感。
3.搜集一些写景名句、名篇准备全班交流。
五、课堂小结：
从本节课的学习中,你得到了哪些收获?
六、课后反思:
现在让我用三句话来总结一下这篇文章。 第一句，雕刻大师罗丹说的：“美，是到处都有的!”这句话相当于文中哪一句? (何夜无月?何处无竹柏?)
第二句，苏轼告诉我们：江山风月本无常主，闲者便是主人。这句话相当于文中哪一句? (但少闲人如吾两人者耳。)
第三句，苏轼告诉我们，要“胸中廓然无一物”。这句话相当于文中哪一句? (庭下如积水空明，水中藻、荇交横，盖竹柏影也。) 本课因为内容少,容易掌握,所以,学生在老师的指导下,对本文的掌握做得很好.
七、板书：
答谢中书书
感慨 山川之美 古来共读
仰视：高峰如云; 俯视：清澈见底 层次分明 平看：两岸石壁; 青竹翠林 视听兼融
绘景 晓： 雾将歇，袁鸟乱啼 动静结合
夕： 日欲颓，沉鳞竞跃 表达多样
感慨 期与谢公比肩 自豪 记承天寺夜游
绘庭中景色 月色 积水空明 水中藻、荇交横
抒闲人情怀 赏月的欣喜 漫步的悠闲
短文改错试题范文第5篇
梁溪县卫生局《会议通知》
全县各食品加工行业：
根据上级关于对食品加工行业的卫生状况进行一次全面大检查的通知精神，决定召开我县食品加工卫生工作会议，部署卫生检查工作，现将有关事项通知如下：
一、会议时间：2009年10月25日至26日。10月24日下午两时至五时报到。
二、参加会议人员：全县各食品加工单位来一名负责人，各乡、镇及县工商联请派出一名代表列席会议。
三、住宿费回单位报销，伙食费个人自理，按有关财政规定给以补助。
梁溪县卫生局(公章)
2009年9月28日
1.标题：只用“会议通知”就好，去掉“梁溪县卫生局”和书名号。
2.正文第一行开头应该空两格
3.“关于对食品加工行业的卫生状况进行一次全面大检查的通知”这个感觉是一个文件的名称，加上书名号，变成《关于对食品加工行业的卫生状况进行一次全面大检查的通知》。
4."现将有关事项通知如下"单独列一行
5.报到日期应该单独拿出来列一项：报到日期：10月24日14：0017：00
6.“参加会议人员”这一条写的太过口语化，公文要严谨，
可改成：
二、与会人员：全县各食品加工单位负责人1名，各乡、镇及县工商联代表1名。
7.“
三、住宿费回单位报销，伙食费个人自理，按有关财政规定给以补助。”也太口语化， 可改为：
三、费用报销：伙食费个人自理，住宿费各相关单位按有关财政规定补助。
8.落款和时间格式不对，应该靠右。
二.修改下列文件标题
1.XX制药公司解决生产名中成药所需虎骨来源的请示
2.XX总公司组建XX实业公司的请示报告
3.XX公司对非法倒卖建筑材料的XXX开除公职的通知
4.XX公司关于开展春季运动会的决定的通知
5.XX总公司对所属单位学徒工转正后关于工资问题的规定
三.指出下列公文文稿的错误之处,并根据公文写作与处理的要求,改写为一份正确的公文.
请示
因工作需要,我县急需购买小轿车一辆，请批准调拨经费XXXXX元。
另：我县尚缺专业对口技术人员XX名，请在制定明年人员编制时一并考虑。
上述意见与要求如无不妥，请批复
此致
敬礼!
XX县人民政府
xx县财政局
2008年9月6日
答案
一、1.制药公司解决生产名贵中成药所需虎骨来源的请示
答：在“公司”后加“关于”
2.总公司组建实业公司的请示报告
答：在“公司”后加“关于”;删除“报告”
3.公司对非法倒卖建筑材料的开除公职的通知
答：在“公司”后加“关于”;将“通知”改为“通报”，将介词“对”删去，移动“开除”一词到“对”的位置。修改后的标题为：公司关于开除非法倒卖建筑材料的公职的通报
4.公司关于开展春季运动会的决定的通知
答：将“开展”改为“举办”，将“的决定”去掉，即：公司关于举行春季运动会的通知
5.总公司对所属单位学徒工转正后关于工资问题的规定
答：将“关于”前置于发文单位之后;删除介词“对”。修改后的标题为:
总公司关于所属单位学徒工转正后工资问题的规定
二、文稿错误之处有：
(1)违反行文规则。一是根据《办法》，请示内容必须“一文一事”，而文中有两件事情。二是落款处，表示联合行文，县政府与县财政局是上下级，违反联合行文应当是同级单位的规定。
(2)文种选用不准确。根据该文内容，其请求事项应报给有关主管部门，不适宜报给上级政府，所以其文种适宜用函。
(3)文件格式不正确：无主送单位、缺少发文字号、成文日期应当用汉字全称。
(4)尾语罗嗦：“此致”和“敬礼”由于上面已经有了期复性尾语，故无必要写。
(5)因无主送单位，请求事项无法办理。此外所叙购车理由不充分。有关“人员编制”问题，应另行行文，届时再办。
该病文改写，应为不同的三篇公文。一篇请求购车拨款、一篇请求批准购车、一篇请求增加人事编制。修改如下：
县人民政府办公室文件
短文改错试题范文第6篇
I am interested at swimming very much. At first, I went swimming just to keep health. Now my dream was to swim for my country in the Olympics. Though practicing in the pool is very bored, but I still work very hard in order to realize my dream. Because my hard work, I have already come first in much important competitions. In the competitions, I’ve made lot of friends and we’re very close. It’s much easier to have friends which are swimmers because they also have to get up early to practice like you and they understand this kind of life.
短文改错
(二)
One day, little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent. It was very crowded. Tony saw a toy on a shop window. He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop. After looks at the toy for some time, he turned around and found where his parents were missing. Tony was scared and begun to cry. A woman saw him crying and telling him to wait outside a shop. Five minutes later. Tony saw parents. Mom said,” How nice to see you again! Dad and I were terrible worried.” Tony promised her that this would never happen again.
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(三)
Last summer vacation, I went on a school trip with mine classmates. We visited a farm in a countryside. We took a bus for a while, and then we walked here. We saw a lot of different kinds trees and villages along the way. Some farmers were worked hard in the farm when we arrived. One of the farmer showed us around, introducing differently crops to us. We fed chickens, picked some green apples and took up many beautiful photos. It was really interesting and at the same time, I learned a lot about farming. What an excited school trip!
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(四)
I’ve been playing baseball for six year and I’m the only girl on an all-boys baseball team. Our strict coach wants us do our best when we are playing. So it’s not always about winning. He also tells us to just smile and enjoyed ourselves. I take advice he gives me and bring them to my game. Some people say girls can’t play baseball. Hear that doesn’t get me mad. Instead, it makes me play more harder. I want to be knew for being a good player, not just for being the only girl on the team. If you’re a girl who want to play ball, just play you heart out!
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(五)
My uncle drove his car meet his friends. When he found there was still some time leaving before the train had arrived, he wanted to take a short sleep. He was falling sleep when a woman came and asked him the time. He opened his eye and answered, “Half past eight.” With a “Thank you!” a woman left. On a short while this happened again. So my uncle wrote “I don’t know the time” on a piece of paper and put them on the window of the car. A few minutes late, an old man came and woke him up, “Hi, young man. I can tell you that time it is. It’s nine o’clock now.”
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(六)
When I began my senior high school years, I had difficulty to learning English. I dared not speak English in the public because of my poor pronounce. I could not get high marks, but I always used bad grammar. Afraid of be laughed at, I never put up my hand answer questions in class. When my English teacher Miss Li learned about this, she encouraged me and lend me a hand, that helped improve my English. With her help, I became interest in English and finally got high marks. Miss Li, like a shining star, shines on her path to success.
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(七)
Dear Tim, How time flies! It has been a month since you go to America. What is everything going? Next weekend I will take part in a national English speaking competition to be holding in Shanghai. It will be a good chance to improve your English and make friends with students from other part of China. But right now I’m not sure that I can remember all the words for a competition. Anyway, I will hope I can get a good result. I am looking forward seeing you again and hope we can have a true great time then.
Yours, Li Hua
短文改错
(八)
短文改错试题范文
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